http://naktibalda.lt/2008/10/13/kelione-i-taishan-kalna-2-dalis/ Sun, 27 Sep 2026 16:38:11 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=4.2.38 http://naktibalda.lt/2008/10/13/kelione-i-taishan-kalna-2-dalis/#comment-155 Sat, 12 Dec 2015 22:08:56 +0000 http://naktibalda.lt/?p=108#comment-155 You’ve gone too far in the other direction too vague. You don’t have to give away the story, but you need to hit some of the pihects. My first thought was: What’s a ghost doing in the house? Is it a haunted house? If it is, then say so. You can’t mention a ghost in passing. My next question was: Why just a deal to move the legs. Why not ask for the whole enchilada and get back in the game? Any kid would want to walk again, but a star baseball player wants much more. That’s where the tension is created What’s he putting on the line? Then you mention faith, and I am thrown completely off. Faith, as in religion? Also, what could be unexpected as a wish for the ball player? I shouldn’t be asking so many questions. I would rewrite the whole logline.VN:F [1.9.17_1161](from 0 votes)

]]> http://naktibalda.lt/2008/10/13/kelione-i-taishan-kalna-2-dalis/#comment-11 Tue, 14 Oct 2008 10:07:14 +0000 http://naktibalda.lt/?p=108#comment-11 Ir kuo gi tas kalnas ypatingas?
Atsakymas:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mount_Tai

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